twenty jaffa cakes
a mistake to try and take
in her hand luggage
a slow and silent pat down
from the woman on gate one
stilettoes x-rayed
but her carbon footprint is
not for scrutiny
a hugely fat man
asks for the front port aisle seat
to rest his bad leg
smile and permanent jetlag
slept in uniform again
deep into morning
i finish my book somewhere
over africa
paul conneally and nikki pugh
July 12th 2007
My plane leaves at 8.30 tomorrow morning. I arrive at Narita on Saturday morning and from there I have to negotiate my way to Yokosuka. After a week or so in various locations around Kanagawa-ken I dive into Tokyo for about a fortnight.
Yesterday we gathered in Keith’s house and penned the final batch of the 100 Verses for 3 Estates (Alec Finlay, Gavin Wade and Paul ConnollyPaul ConneallyLittle Onion).
You already *know* there was a good bunch of people there and the atmosphere was great, but the food was delicious and deserves a special mention - thanks guys!
Does it sound like we didn’t work very hard?
There was some serious thinking going on too…
Anthony asked us if we could get the kids a park to play in, instead of his wall (I don’t mind the hanging/but it’s the rubbish I can’t stand).
Liam started off by telling us about how he was often chased by the police. But stayed with us all day and wrote several nice verses (I fell out with my girlfriend/Norma/and got her back).
Joan came back again and was on as good form as last time (the bees in my bushes/are much too big/they’re black).
One of last month’s verses really hit home for a man whose son had returned home from Iraq that day (love goes home/to battlezone sighs/and Basra baggies).
Nice things from being sat in the middle of a council estate shopping precinct on a Saturday in June whilst writing poetry and inviting passers by to join us:
Joan - not sure what she had originally planned to do with her day, but she spent about 6 hours of it with us.
Joan - not sure if she really understood what we were doing, but she didn’t ‘alf come out with some corkers.
Gloria - initially intensely suspicious of what we were doing and our motives for doing so. She went away to think about it, but re-appeared 10 minutes later and contributed a verse.
Gloria - likes botany.
Diesel - local mc from the estate. Presumably spends a lot of time working with words and performing in front of crowds.
Diesel - Didn’t half look nervous when he was sat down talking with us.
Gang of youths - hanging around looking dismissive of what we were doing, but making sure they could hear what we were saying. “They’re writing poetry man, and then they just all go quiet.”
Maxine - Works in the cafe, but managed to join us for a while at the beginning of the session.
Maxine - Would join us on one of the Saturdays she’s not working, but she’ll be akido training instead.
Paul - for gently (but persistantly!) pointing out that, as of lunchtime, none of my verses had yet been selected!
Link minds to write an artwork for Kings Norton 3 Estates using the form of a Japanese shared writing schema. Over a period of 4 seasons produce 100 verses in 6 different sites and provide a new tool for considering the future of the estates, its inhabitants, its identity, its visions.